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Sunday, 27 May 2018
Writing Sample - Persuasive Speech
Reflection:
I think I did well with my speaking and reading because i didn't stutter or say the wrong word but I think i could work on looking at the audience for longer and more
Helena, you have crafted a strong argument. I like the way you have used specific vocabulary to suit the topic. Your next step is to work on writing a strong conclusion. You were very brave speaking in front of the class!
Helena, you have crafted a strong argument. I like the way you have used specific vocabulary to suit the topic. Your next step is to work on writing a strong conclusion. You were very brave speaking in front of the class!
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